
Harry Potter
One of my favorite movies is Harry Potter series. Who doesn’t know this movie? Because this movie is the biggest movie in this century. Harry Potter movie is based on book by the author J.K. Rowling. I very like this movie because the setting are good and wonderful. In this movie I like some places.
The first place is school. The crew especially the director can make the school so real with magician atmosphere. In school we can see many magic tools and effects. Like in the dining room, the roof looks like the sky with many stars there. Not just it, the stairs can move to the other side every a minute, and that is so cool. Because I never watch like that before. And also about the painting, the painting can move and talk like human. That is so impossible to believe but that is interested.
The second place is railway station. In this movie, harry potter should pass platform 9 ¾ in railway station. But there are no platform 9 ¾, and you know where is it? Peron 9 ¾ is located between platform 9 and 10, but it just a wall. the interest part for me is how can the director and crew make it so real? that was so amazing..
And the third place is forest beside the school. The crew especially the director can make the atmosphere so dark, mysterious and scary with many wild and curious animals like big spider and horse with human body. And the forest is called by ‘Forbid Forest’, because dangerous to student.
I think this movie have the best movie effect that I have ever seen.
hi....dhira....
BalasHapusyour writing is same with me,,but you choose the setting on harry potter,,and i choose the plot of the story,,,
your improvement is more better than before,,,
good luck!
thanks,,
karina 120810476G
hi.. dhira.. :)
BalasHapusyour writing is good enough..
This story so interesting and you describe more better than before..
don't forget to give me comment too..
Pratiwi Ramandita 120810487G
your writing is good enough,.
BalasHapusyour writing is focus enough,.
your grammar can you improve,.
elok 120810486G
Well,,
BalasHapusAfter i read ur argumentation..
I think it's great...
U explained u like so clearly...
Yeah...
and I really agree that Harry Potter is the Greatest movie ever..
I like all of Tha Harrt Potter series..
hy nadhira. . . . .
BalasHapusi like your paragraph. and you have same story with karina, but you just explaining about place. . . .
and your improvement is better than before. . .
Rico 120810490 G
good writing!
BalasHapusbut i found few very-little mistakes.
just like this:
the setting are good and wonderful
you may re-write it into:
the settings are good and wonderful
or
the setting is good and wonderful
keep in good writing! :)
hay dhir...
BalasHapusin fact, many our friends write about harry potter and one of is your
i think your writing is good,focus and easy to understand
don't forget to give me comment too...
kurnia suci (120810488G)